It doesn't really make sense but I can tell you put a bit of work into it, so for that you get 1 and a half thumbs up.
Why what? =)
Not bad but its pretty strange. -Adolf
Its as normal as can be; It happens every day. -Not-Adolf
Its good but Fionna doesn't have a nose. :P -Adolf
I do say this was a fair short. It had some humor in it, although you need to fix the audio. I have the audio setting on 100% and I could barely hear it, also there are some animation bugs [They're not very noticeable so I wouldn't worry]. Other than that this was a good, short, and sweet animation. Maybe you'll be able to make a series eventually, haha. -Adolf
Thank you for the feedback :) Yes, the audio could have been raised some. It was old recorded audio from a while ago, and I forgot to fix it :P And, I am actually in the script writing process for the first episode of a new series, still to be named. Kind of inspired by EddsWorld.
Short and sweet, although you could add more humor to it. -Adolf
Thanks! And okay :)
To be honest this kinda sucked. Needs more work and fix that annoying animation bug. -Adolf
Thanks for the response! That animation bug shouldn't have been there, I'll fix it ASAP. Keep in mind that this is a first draft though.
This has potential to become a good series. It has fair animation, decent dialog, and the music was okay. I'd say you did a fine job on this. -Adolf
Well this was, how do I say it, dissapointing.
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